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hi kindergarten Raiders today I am in a different location that means a different place in my classroom and I wanted to show you my chart that says writers write to make a word better and then I have The Lorax I'm here if you've ever heard this story The Lorax is somebody who stood up for what he believed in and he persisted and he kept saying this is a problem this is a problem this is a problem he was trying to change the problem and make his world a better place so when we are writing to make our world a better place I know in my class when we talk a lot of running in the hallway not washing your hands properly may be playing in the bathroom kids walking up the slide all those things are problems at the school so first we think and we see our problem sorry the number to as we think how can we make this problem better you always need a solution that means you can't just say kids are running the house what can we do about that we remind them not to run in the hall we make posters to put in the wall can we tell the principal can we tell the teacher what is our solution so we need to have an idea and then we're going to write a lot more writing to persuade somebody working somebody about the problem we can write in lots of different ways we can we can make us a song we can make a poster we can write a letter we can read a story we can do lots of things as long as we are riding a lot to show that we see a problem and we know how we can fix it and number for SouthEast satisfied who who rewriting to who is our audience that means who's listening who do we want to listen in kids running in the hall we want the kids to know maybe you shouldn't be doing that first we might have to tell him it's all if we want to remind people to wash their hands the people we want to talk to other people who are not washing their hands that's who you are no so I want to teach you a little something today and it is just a nice song that talks about if we see a problem and we want to fix it writing about drawing pictures about it talking about we can help fix that problem so you're going to say if we had a problem this is what we do it in the morning later right in the evening we drive it says all over this land I mean everywhere and we tried out danger danger like running the hall danger like climbing up the slide up of somebody sliding down his changer weed right out warning people that there's a problem we would help fix all the problems all over this land okay so this is how this song goes if you want to sing it with me cuz like that I had a problem I dried it in the Moon running at a ride in the evening all over this morning how to fix the problem over this late I'm just a little bit I'm going to try to do a better this time okay so far I've had a problem in the morning and the evening and morning and at how fix a problem all over there and if I had a problem there it is all over there danger warning and I have to fix the problem over this Wednesday got it can you become a writer the changes the world I know you can't keep it up kindergartener you got it

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